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Autumnal city barriers

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This picture captures autumn unfolding in a cityscape, just as the barriers capture the folding, fallen autumnal leaves. There is a clear path cut between the barriers yet only the wind has stopped the leaves blowing underneath them, as if held by a hidden force of unknown nature. The leaves themselves play in harmony with the curves of both the path and both enclosing walls as if miniaturising and teasing a representation of millions of Londoners going to work on this one path.

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watcher330 said...

Like it - even without the words. I would like to see some darker tonal values though; not to be overdone but this tends to the overall light side. But good composition and analogy.

Posted on 16/01/2008 13:57

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Vinny Smith said...

Thanks for the feedback - I hadn't seen the tonal element in this way before but now you point it out I can see exactly what you mean. Very helpful! I'm a complete novice so this comment I founhd very useful indeed.

Posted on 21/01/2008 09:23

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