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I took this photo by orford-ness. eating a picnic with my best friend looking out on the gloomy buildings in which The uk and usa developed a new form of radar, i took the picture because it seems no one has picnics on cold days,. I did my best to make the picture appear 'candid' by adding motion. For my the focus of the picture is the floor. I feel this meets the project brief because it holds many passions, my girlfriend, the sea, picnics, fashion, tea.

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Mrs Load said...

I like your setting and the subject very much. I'd like to go into the building behind you - I like that you can see a few objects in the window. Personally I might have cropped a little off the top and a little from the left side and I am not sure the motion helps it appear candid - I think you have done a good job with that anyway. There's a certain humour to your picnic - a sort of two fingers up - "We want a picnic we'll have a picnic!"

Posted on 19/01/2008 16:53

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