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  jacobmcdowall said...

  really well framed, and think the small depth of field works brilliantly, shame about the small piece of dirt on the lense but other than that ,, really good!

  Posted on 22/01/2008 19:15

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  dawn.millward said...

  thanks. poor editing! i use film not digital. i checked the orginal photo which was dirt free, then checked the scanner and saw something on the scanner which led to mark on the image.sorry about that, human error.

  Posted on 25/01/2008 13:47

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  parrpolygon said...

  This photo half makes it, the angle and the short depth of field are all working in the photo's favour, but I think there should have been something more specific to focus on. I am not sure what that might have been, perhaps one rose, one cross, just something to anchor the photo. I think this language, you have worked out for this shot has great potential to be developed more.

  Posted on 23/01/2008 21:23

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  dancing with light and mischief said...

  Yes, I agree. There is something quite special about this photo but there is also just one thing that need to stand out (not particular in focus but because you eyes keep going off into the tree in the distance and that is not what you are trying to tell from the picture - if you know what I am trying to say here). Although, the colour of the flower is just beautiful - there is something very deep about it.

  Posted on 23/01/2008 22:43

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  dawn.millward said...

  i was delighted totally delighted to have a comment from you.i know exactly what you mean about not having a single focus, i did n't think about it at the time as a only had minutes to take the shots. its something i will be much more aware of. i really enjoy your photographs and our daughter alice is using your work in her gcse art. thanks for taking the time to comment, it really has meant a huge amount to me as i really enjoy and admire your photographs. thanks

  Posted on 25/01/2008 13:44

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  robinhj said...

  A great idea but if I had not read the explanation I would not have been able to work out what I was looking at which is not ideal.

  Posted on 24/01/2008 13:48

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